I Could Tell You A Story - Comments

  • JayyJayy

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    Good poem :)
    December 21st, 2010 at 05:13am
  • thirteen

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    I liked how you use references to non-everyday things while using the topic of an everyday thing, even if we don't think about friendship or devotion everyday, it's still in the atmosphere.
    April 19th, 2010 at 04:51am
  • aye chica !

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    I dunno why, but I found this poem to be very cute (:
    I like it a lot!
    April 19th, 2010 at 03:58am