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May 2nd, 2011 at 07:43pm
I love this. The idea of nights assisstance to the humans, the way you used hte word 'endure' to describe their feelings towards each others company, really paints the picture that they aren't on good ground.
Also, at the end, even though her children are dead, it says that she will go on and that she is undefeated. I love the message it sends!!! XD I know you showed me this before, I think at school, back in year eight, but its great for analytical work. Love it!! XD