This has to be one of the best poems written. It's so real and honest, like your not hiding anything nor holding anything back. It's amazing. Keep up the writing. Your great.
I like this I understand it a lot, the flow is nice but the rhyming is a little splicey in spots but it works really well for this for this, good job, keep up the work.
I really like this a lot. I feel old all the time so I can really relate to this. Usually I don't like straight to the point poems, but this is definitely an exception. Good job. :)