The Battle of Emotions - Comments

emmster (100)

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BAHAHA love the last line

July 18th, 2010 at 08:11am

LoVeli (100)

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LOL! thanks to all of u who do or do not like my poem but this poem meant something to me. I tried to show the emotions, happiness and failure of a persons life. As for the grammer it was basically meant to b the way it was. (bad english) :)
but in all thankz i love hearing feed bad

July 14th, 2010 at 07:12pm

KittyHugs (100)

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It adds to the emotion. your style of writing reminds me of paul laurence dunbar. keep it that way, he was a great poet, you are too.

May 21st, 2010 at 08:07am

ZACKYVLOVESME! (100)

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dont listen to tht person... juss be your self... if ppl dont like it then fuck them

May 21st, 2010 at 08:03am

Bipolar Halo (100)

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You need to capitalize and use proper grammar. People on this site are really uptight about it.

May 21st, 2010 at 08:02am

KittyHugs (100)

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this holds so much rage and anger. I applaud you. I am a fan. please put more up. (: I would love it. This reminds me of so many famous poets put together into one writer. you have skill.

May 21st, 2010 at 08:00am

ZACKYVLOVESME! (100)

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DOT!!! i love this.... why u so upset?

May 21st, 2010 at 07:59am