The Battle of Emotions - Comments

BAHAHA love the last line

LOL! thanks to all of u who do or do not like my poem but this poem meant something to me. I tried to show the emotions, happiness and failure of a persons life. As for the grammer it was basically meant to b the way it was. (bad english) :)
but in all thankz i love hearing feed bad

It adds to the emotion. your style of writing reminds me of paul laurence dunbar. keep it that way, he was a great poet, you are too.

dont listen to tht person... juss be your self... if ppl dont like it then fuck them

You need to capitalize and use proper grammar. People on this site are really uptight about it.

this holds so much rage and anger. I applaud you. I am a fan. please put more up. (: I would love it. This reminds me of so many famous poets put together into one writer. you have skill.

DOT!!! i love this.... why u so upset?