Is it because I love too much? - Comments

singedfingers (100)

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This is awesome. I like how you kind of downgrade it at the end with those simple lines: "Falling stars. Falling hearts. Falling lives." Beautiful.

January 11th, 2011 at 11:25pm

imbalance (100)

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Love this. It flows so well

January 11th, 2011 at 12:25pm

Walking.Oxymoron (200)

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I enjoyed this. The metaphors are great.
I love the line "Words wrap around my body in a twisted, grotesque internal lullaby." there is a lot of imagery in that line, it makes me want to paint.

December 7th, 2010 at 03:14am

chana300 (100)

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I like everything about this poem, it make me wanna cry everything I read it.

October 19th, 2010 at 07:01pm

CameOutSwinging (100)

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Brilliant. I love this. Thank you for recommending cause it was really good :)

October 15th, 2010 at 10:12pm

Bulbasaur (150)

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that was absolutely lovely!!

July 31st, 2010 at 03:57am

Teddi Manni (100)

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i love this not only does this have great metaphors and you can totally vision it all but i can relate soo much to it! great job :)

July 29th, 2010 at 06:50pm

thatbekkahgirl (100)

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lovely words

"It’s too late for the shelter of second chances.
It’s already raining.
And I’m already wet."

definitely hooked me

June 12th, 2010 at 11:12pm