Generation of Apathy - Comments

  • crowning.

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    Well, this is impressive. It`s true and it motivates me (and others, probably) to want to fix it.
    October 21st, 2010 at 05:36am
  • symphon1c

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    This is very sad, but very true.
    It's so awesome of you to address it.
    Most people just write sappy, sometimes meaningless poems about love, but you're writing about something that's very important.
    Good job. c:
    October 12th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • roux.

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    Now [i]this[/i] is what I'm talking about.
    For real, it's no secret that most of the people on here ignore the world around them and write about...uhm...other stuff. You've turned a poem into something that should be dealt with seriously by everyone with a brain.

    I'm glad you commented and I love this poem.
    September 11th, 2010 at 08:01am
  • AnneAlysse

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    You're amazing at turning such unpoetic issues into poetry. Well written, as all of your poems are, and the obvious truths it addresses are perfectly portrayed. Another job well done!
    September 10th, 2010 at 05:47am
  • luna phantomhive.

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    I loved it! =DDDD

    The reality of your words, and the emphasis on the matter- it really is quite extraordinary. It's also precise and to the point, something unusual in a poem... I love the unusual. I wish I could love it even more, but I am not quite at the stage where I can fully understand it.

    I just know that this poem rocked! XD
    September 7th, 2010 at 09:31am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    Death now is just a part of a standard routine

    Brilliance in that single line. Can you please write more like this? Honestly, I'm hooked.
    September 1st, 2010 at 06:13am
  • colibri

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    I love this poem. It kicks ass, majorly, and I think it's completely true, and honest. Violence is pretty much everywhere. I'm kind of jealous of you skill, man. You should put more poems up, I'd read them all. (:
    August 1st, 2010 at 05:29am
  • Isadora Pierce

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    This was completely true. If only parents would read it, they'd realize. I'm not sure if it was supposed to rhyme because it didn't, but I liked it nonetheless.
    July 26th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • Jimmy Novak

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    This was... brilliant. You addressed a really obvioius issue that I haven't seen anyone else acknowledge as of yet. I wish there was a way of favoriting poems. <3
    July 20th, 2010 at 06:32pm
  • stencil heart.

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    This was good, really good. And true.
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:53am
  • suddenlyobscure

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    I. Loved. This.
    I honestly don't read that many poems because... Well I just don't.
    I thought this was absolutely amazing and it was completely true.
    Fantastic job :)
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • The Warden's Wife

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    Great work! I love it!
    So true, and very beautifully worded and rhyming.
    June 22nd, 2010 at 05:18am