This poem was absolutely spectacular. Once more, the name of it drew me in, but this poem was so fabulous, I just adored it. Nothing felt forced, nothing felt off, and the message behind it was just so beautiful. I recently lost an aunt, and this really expresses those emotions after a loved one’s death really well. It was beautifully constructed, and beautifully written. My only constructive criticism would be to say that you need to check over it and fix those few words that are spelled wrong. ;) Other than that, there’s nothing wrong with it and you should be very, very proud of yourself on this piece.
August 3rd, 2011 at 07:36am
