Pretty Girl - Comments

I LOVE THIS POEM !

Ah, love! I love this! It's a beautiful piece and it calls out to the heart. Such a wonderful story. This is pure emotion and it's really working it well. =)

I love this! Mibba needs an option where people could subscribe to poems, I would read this one over and over. I love how the reader can relate to some of the stanzas, if not all of them, and then pick out people in their lives who resemble the girl in some of the other stanzas. If that made any sense at all...:) I just loved it.

i think it's beautiful. it IS beautiful
love it <33

I like this! A lot! It's perfect. This has to be the best poem I've read, no lie haha! I'm not really a fan of rhyming but you make it work. It's subtle and it flows well. Good work :)

Wow! Astonishingly beautiful.It is so creative and flows so well! I can really feel the emotions you've poured into every word. I especially love, 'spider's silk is stronger than twine, and steel will melt with fire"

Wow. GRRR so I had the pefect comment then mibbs exed out on me. How rude!
Okay. So anyway:

Wow this is just...........
Gruel?(mean girls reference) haha
no, honestly it is phenomenal. No rough lines or anything at all. You have a serious talent. How lucky are you that you get the raw talent of writing and then the ability to poish it off! Just wow. As previously mentioned let me know when you update and add poems and I will be happy to read them :)

I love the line:"hearts aren't hidden for a reason" and then the following stanza as well... Don't change a thing. Just remember when you are writing a poem with a rhyming pattern that you keep in throughout the poem. For example, you use a rhyme scheme of ABCB throughout Pretty Girl, but in stanza 3 you use ABAB.
If that made any sense............Bravo! for understanding! Like I said, you do not need to change anything though, because i do ^ all the time. It works in this poem.
Magnificent job!

Anna.

wow. that.is.incredible. and chilling, in a good way! : ) phanomenal!

the poem is really good i love it very much you have a natural talent

the repition is haunting... and it makes the point slap you in the face.. buh it still leaves you with somthing to think about... i LOVE it :D

This is an incredible poem. The repition is almost haunting and the words are wonderful, the rhyming isn't silly and your imagery is great, (: