Why Do You Want Your Life To End? - Comments

very sad but very good

wow, thats amazing, iwas tearing up then , its heartbreakingly beautiful.

Amazing :o)

Thanks Just Hollow... I wanted it to be detailed but mostly up front & to the point of how I feel about what she's going through.

I never said in the poem she wanted to commit suicide... I titled it that because she feels she has no reason for living... She came close to dying... I just don't want to see her in pain no more... And Be able to come to me to help. :( Thank you for the comment. :)

incredibly long, but still, i read through the whole thing (rare) because i did like it.
i agree with the previous commenter as well though.
but interesting rhyming/rhythm, good emotion, great poem overall <3

Not all cutters want to commit suicide
Its a common misconception

Poem has intersting lines though, bit long for my tastes