tears and invisible - Comments

  • TheOneLeftBehind

    TheOneLeftBehind (100)

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    i think it was a wonderful poem:) spelling is not everything so ignore the person's comment below :)
    July 24th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • CoOoCoOoCajoOo

    CoOoCoOoCajoOo (100)

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    *invisible
    *caused
    *hiding
    *something
    *it's
    *comes
    *she's
    *innocence
    *something
    *everything
    *run
    *through
    *different
    *pity
    *letting
    *anyone

    Terrible spelling and grammar such as this will not earn you any serious recognition in the writing community.
    July 24th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • lilpandagirl

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    i know how it feels. this is amazing, it tells the story of the human condition
    July 23rd, 2010 at 11:52pm