Terrified - Comments

Well, wow! I can really relate to this poem, it's great to see something that is so true put down in words like this. I love how you repeat terrified, its really effective. And again I love love the ending - "Because terror, you see, is easy to spend.
Once you've lost it you'll witness the
world arise in your hands."

WOW,it's really nice and meaningfull=)

Fav part:

"I am terrified of danger, the
water's too deep.
I am terrified to try, my thoughts
make me weak.
I am terrified to run, where I want
to be is far.
I'm terrified to lose you, and be
lost without a heart."

this is beautiful, i really like it =)