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  • Deanie

    Deanie (100)

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    That is a really touching poem, and mostly in serious poems when people try to rhyme too it really fails. But this was really good! :D
    February 15th, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • PaulieMalcore

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    I'm a sucker for rhymes, and I really enjoyed how this rhymed. Keep it up, you've got some potential
    August 11th, 2010 at 02:38am