yerr wellz it is all based on tru feelins and experiance soooo it should be very passionate
August 20th, 2010 at 12:21pm
The pain you never knew you cauzed - Comments
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I like how you changed your tone of voice in the last stanza. This is a really good poem.August 19th, 2010 at 08:19am
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I kinda like it. Love the way, you're able to bring out your inner pain though.August 19th, 2010 at 04:50am
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I am really sorry for any guy or girl that has eva felt like i didAugust 19th, 2010 at 04:46am
