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  • MissylinaRose-Sming

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    yerr wellz it is all based on tru feelins and experiance soooo it should be very passionate
    August 20th, 2010 at 12:21pm
  • T-Grieco

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    I like how you changed your tone of voice in the last stanza. This is a really good poem.
    August 19th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • Oh!Why?

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    I kinda like it. Love the way, you're able to bring out your inner pain though.
    August 19th, 2010 at 04:50am
  • MissylinaRose-Sming

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    I am really sorry for any guy or girl that has eva felt like i did
    August 19th, 2010 at 04:46am
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