Oh wow. This was great. Again, the repetition really sets the tone for the whole piece, and the imagery used paints this lovely serene picture. The ending, the last couple stanzas, tied everything together just perfectly.
[i]And I
Floating on the waves
Finding pictures in the cloud
Scraping along the sand[/i]
Wow, I like how it all came together in the final stanza. It was brilliantly written without a doubt. The structure, I found, fit the poem well and the use of colours throughout was well done as well.
[i]And I
Floating on the waves
Finding pictures in the cloud
Scraping along the sand[/i]
I love those lines. A lot.