Cut it out. - Comments

holy cheese, dude.

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How this poem hasn't got a bajillion comments is beyond me. This is AWESOME.

I don't read poems a lot, because it's even harder than with stories to find anything I might like, but WOW.

-wonders if BBcode will work-
[i]Cut it out.
Smash it in.
Homes can't be built on dreams.
It wasn't how it seems.[/i]

Best sequence in the whole thing. I loved it. Be right back with the next poem :cute:

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me likeeeyyyyy

amazing... i agree with penguin massacre . that line is outstanding

I love the 'pain comes before pills in the dictionary'
This is cool for five minutes :D

Thank you guys, and yes i did write it in 5 minutes.

ILY Guys ^^

I loved it how it was rhyming in some parts but not over the top rhyming.
And! It was wow. I love it.
It's almost like it could be a song, but I love this poem.
ILY and this poem.
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It's awesome, doesn't even seem like you wrote it in five minutes. ^-^