I'll Win - Comments

I'm sort of torn on whether or not I like the format of the poem. On one hand, I really enjoy it because it conveys what the poem is trying to say, almost like pictures or illustrations. On the other hand, I'm not sure if the poem would have the same impact without it, though I'm not sure if that's bad or good or none of the above.

I think it's great that you took so much time to think about how to display this though. Obviously you understood it very well because you made it come alive for the reader.

nice job on the poem

The format alone explains what the poem is about. Even if the poem was gibberish I would still get it. It sort of illustrates what's going on inside. You're seriously talented sweets!

wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I really dont know what else to say about it. It was just...wow. lol so awesome job on it =)

I love formatting quirks and yours is probably the coolest poem I've seen

i like this. its different and stands out.
soooo..props. (:

awesume

I like the end, I'll win. I like it. I like how the bolded words like jump out at you.

Not my best but its a bit of a complex format I did this one years ago when I was in one of my depression spells