Desert Road - Comments

fiji_guurl (100)

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Great job :)

May 21st, 2011 at 05:21am

HellVolhardZelinsky (100)

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It's really good. I really really like how you put your point across. :)

May 15th, 2011 at 01:12pm

MadisonLynn (100)

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Wonderful <3

March 4th, 2011 at 02:09am

SwimLonely (100)

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This is beautiful! It's an amazing conception and you told it brilliantly! Much love for it! =)

February 4th, 2011 at 08:57pm

xweirdkind123x (100)

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Brillant

September 24th, 2010 at 04:56am

Alibi (100)

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This is absolutely amazing, I love it.

September 17th, 2010 at 11:42am

vampire_lover666 (100)

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Its wonderful, it really is

September 11th, 2010 at 12:09am

Intellectual Lullaby (100)

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Once again, fantastic job. I love how you used real situations with somethings as trivial as 3 different color cars in a line, but how they represent something so much stronger. Wow. Wow. You are my poet role model!
Tech me, Yoda!
Nice job with the rhyme scheme as well. Bravo, Bravo.
Everything you writs is just....GAHHH I WANT TO BE YOU!

Love Always,
Anna :)

September 10th, 2010 at 02:57am

Apostle (100)

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This is amazing, I can't believe you only have 3 readers or that i'm the first to comment! This is truly the best poem i've read all night. =]

September 10th, 2010 at 12:54am