January 14th, 2008 at 12:41pm
wow, that's one of the best poems i've read on here =D
i love the unusual rhyming pattern, and the way you can make it all rhyme perfectly without it being forced at all.
awesome!
susie x
Really loved it. Your making me seem dumber by each word I read xD
I really liked the 3rd paragraph.
Belinda. xx [still faithful reader]