Left Behind - Comments

I like this. I thought the repetition worked well for it. It was another very relatable poem. I like the beach reference in the first stanza. It's like I can picture a girl there saying and wondering all these things. I was slightly confused about the "for" part in the three stanza but other than that, this is great.

Another wonderful poem. You're good at this! :D It was very relatable, for me at least, and your repetition is well-executed. Bit dark, but it's an excellent read, possibly [i]because[/i] it's dark.

I really liked this poem. I thought it was sad and depressing but that's good in poems. Poems are meant to capture true emotion and I adore that yours did. I thought that the repetition of the line was really genius and it really hit a place of hard time. I thought it was really well executed and had such a raw emotion and it was amazing.

This was very well-written. It wasn't very long, but it had loads of meaning to it. I also like the repetition of the "I am the girl who always got left behind" line.

You did a good job.

One of my favorites of yours <3

this is a great poem. i love it!

truely beautiful. I really enjoyed this peom. Its so sad yet hold so much meaning. I love the way its written and how it all just flows together.