Blast from the past - Comments

I meant, 'stanza'
and heyyy, we all write the best when we can barely open our eyes :3

I was half sleep when i typed it lol

I like this,
it IS sad; but I think it depicts the emotions you're feeling pretty well.
Constructive critisism [sp?] : In the first stanze, you used the word 'rut' twice. I think it'd sound better with a different word, :D
Anyway, I still really like this.