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  • Alizechaser

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    That was extremely deep.
    July 29th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • R i R o

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    You put a lot of emotion in it and I could relate a bit which makes me tear up a bit. My only suggestion is maybe putting more punctuation and maybe double spacing just so the reader can read it easier. Besides that It's really good!
    October 4th, 2010 at 02:51am
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