5th and Germaine - Comments

Whoa. Man, I really like this! The tone you write it with...is awesome.

This is great.
Extreamly descriptive in a way that I could see it.
It's amazing.

This one is my favorite of yours <3
It really says something.
It's inspiring c:

Eh this one kind of came off as a drabble to me. I know not all poems rhyme, but I like those a lot. Anyways, other then that it was really good, though it kind of made me confused.

I love your poems. I could so see this in my head. Yet it was in England. I have no idea why though. But still. Good(:

Ha. I want to put a melody to this, but I'm afraid I'll be sued. In other words, a professional should have written this. It's so flawless and so unique and abstract. You have such a way with poetry and stringing the words along to make an emotional tune seem so pitiful. Brilliant.

Whoaa, I loved this. I totally pictured it all in my head. For some odd reason, the guy in my head was black haha XD so random.

And I really loved how you used sir repeatedly. It remind me a lot of this one poet's work though I fail to remember his name. :/ I really loved this.