The Colours - Comments

Oh cool!
I love the bit about wanting to eat the colours, I agree with the person before who said it makes it strong. It provides... character. Yes, character. This is a lovely poem :)

This is rather beautiful. I like how you compare the leaves and the trees to different things in life such as sin. Though I found the lines about eating the colors rather awkward actually. I couldn't seem to understand what it had to do with everything else especialy since you seem to compare those leaves and colors to sins.

...love it!

my favorite line is...

"I want to eat them."

it seems strong and out there.... it really turns the poem around...

This is really beautiful, I love it:]
xx