The Nightmare of My Life - Comments

[i]I met a girl today
She is the part of me that I locked away[/i]

Great opening lines, I loved that about this poem.
Stay away from cliches, though, and you'd be terrific.

Great job. I feel like that a lot of times too.

wow
this is deep
i lyk this one
and i can relate
and its weird b/c its deff sumthin that can happen
and it is a nightmare
and who the fuck rele wants it ya kno?