Aura Stop crying - Comments

this is beautiful. i love it.its like hes fighitng with himself on what to do. you are very good do not let anyone tell you otherwise

this is a really good poem for the story. i like it a lot! :)

This is in one word; Amazing!
I could feel exactly what their feeling in a way that I cant with my own writing. I love the way you incorporated her mum leaving into it. The whole poem is just breathtaking, you captured her dad's battle with himself so perfectly.
Well done, this link will be up with the next chapter and thank you so much for writing it. :)