Irritated and Impatient - Comments

  • rawryourself

    rawryourself (100)

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    This is how I feel a good portion of the time.....heh.
    I like the rhyming, you did a good job with it. It doesn't sound forced.
    Overall this is a very nice poem(: Fantastic job.
    December 22nd, 2010 at 10:14am
  • imbalance

    imbalance (100)

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    That's powerful!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 08:02am