Another Meltdown - Comments

Now you have a real wife and someone who would never let you feel that way! I love you baby!

This is a very emotional piece, I love the way it's structured and where the rhymes are placed, everything is perfection. The imagery you create is heart breaking and so powerful. Are you sure you're not a published poet in disguise....???

First of all, this made me cry, because I know those feelings, and I was there throughout all of that, but this made me picture it sooo much more visually and it broke my heart. This was so well written, and it lets everyone know exactly how you were feeling. You don't hold back at all, which you shouldn't. You should let us know what the hell is going on, because I guarantee a lot people don't understand at it and think it's nothing big, but it is. With that said, I know you are strong and that you can overcome this, with or without my help. I don't want to take any credit at all because that is all you wifey. You are a strong girl and a beautiful girl inside and out and I love you for it. I loved this poem and I think that you have so much laying ahead of you because you have wonderful talent that has been unspoken.

xoxoxoxoxo

Mrs. Sullivan ;)

It started off rough and bumpy but I love how it went on. I have felt this way many times and I am glad you wrote this. You have a way with words and the flow was good. I didn't struggle to read it. Keep up the good work :)