Elevation - Comments

I haven't much experience in poem writing - except for a few times I've written them a long, long time ago. And unlike this one, they were terrible.

Anyway, I like this, like, a lot. The words you used, they flow is elegantly, it's genius. I think my favorite verse has to be the fourth one. Especially the first line, [i]he always gets what he commands[/i].

I'm not sure what else to say, but this is beautiful. It really is.

I love it. I really do.
The words you choose flow so well, and it's so perfectly written. I love the idea you've chosen, and it's so plain in the words what you're trying to get down. The last verse was probably my favourite - it sums everything up brilliantly. I really admire people who can write poetry, because I never understand it, but this really was wonderful. <3