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  • Caravaggio

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    Clowns are creepy. Seriously, very creepy. They don't seem to ever be just normal, there has to be something abnormal about them, that makes them just disturbing. And, for your poem, it was the grin. It was only described in one line, and yet, I can picture what you mean clearly, and it's so easily pictured.
    August 28th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • Tongue

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    Wow this was amazing. Some how sick and twisted. I loved it.
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:27am
  • Taste

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    I think I like this one the most, I really adore your writing!
    May 25th, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • JJNeil1991

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    "..waste no wisdom on those whose only wish is to ignore." Love this line. I really love the extent to which you stretch your metaphors here, and the psychology and outlook in this is very well crafted. I really really like this :)
    April 21st, 2011 at 02:03am
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