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  • vampiresskp

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    This is amazing and flows together evenly, it is great and stands out. I love it :)
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:54am
  • Johniece

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    OMFG, I did comment already XD Oh well, I just boosted your comments :3 so FEEL FUCKING SPECIAL! <3
    June 28th, 2011 at 02:42pm
  • Johniece

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    You showed me this once before, I read it...and LOVED IT. WHY DIDN'T I COMMENT THEN?! Or did I already comment >__> Either way, this is amazing.....I think I love you now.
    June 28th, 2011 at 02:41pm
  • BlackOceanSunset

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    I really like it. nice work ^_^
    June 28th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • Phyren

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    ;-; this somehow scares me.
    remind me to check your pockets before we meet.
    joking. it was beautiful <3
    June 25th, 2011 at 09:09am
  • tenuousness.

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    c: Very good job, Aaronmoo.
    rhyming scheme was very good. I think it would be difficult to do such a poeeem, the dark sense but rhyming? lolol
    May 1st, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Moonlight_1341

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    that was perfect. this one is my favorite. it reminds me of a simpler poe (:
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:11am
  • ViLola

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    Aweeeeee, very.... Interesting way of writing, as always, love.
    April 7th, 2011 at 07:35am
  • stereophonics28

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    Hyfryd, innit.
    March 8th, 2011 at 05:42pm
  • Crow the Deadman

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    Commentary.
    March 4th, 2011 at 10:04am
  • Carson;

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    I like this. It has alot of potential and makese good sense.
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    One of my all time fave poems.
    March 3rd, 2011 at 03:39am
  • Malice Alina

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    ...This is probably my new favorite...the title fits perfectly to it. You did an amazing job, it was creepy yet...entertaining, if that makes sense. I love the strong meaning to do this. Love your work aaron, keep it up!
    March 3rd, 2011 at 03:21am
  • HelloI'mNaked

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    This is really interesting!! I love your wordage, for one. It made the whole thong very powerful. This is such a strong piece of writing. I love it. Your underlying meanings are strong, deep and passionate. It is very morbid, but I like it. I'm not going to lie, I felt a bit of fear while reading. Lol. This is just really good, and you're so talented. Good job, kiddo.
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • Leah...

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    Wow... Im speechless. This is an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job on this Aaron. It may be morbid, but I think there is a hidden meaning lying just underneath the words... and if there isnt supposed to be, Well I got one anyways. xD
    This is an absolutely amazing piece, it seems like something that will stick with you once you read it.

    I think its your best.. ever. :D

    Good job, big brudder:3
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:41am
  • sunotara

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    This is amazing!
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:17am
  • Bexy.

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    Wonderfully painful. <3 But I dunno if this was on purpose but it lacks grammar. And if it was on purpose then i didn't catch on. D:
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:16am
  • CC;

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    You've always been a talented poem, but that was possibly the most morbid thing of yours that I've actually read.

    It was written well and you kept up a good, constant rhyming scheme, which was... well, good.

    All in all a very good, very well composed, if not dark and morbid poem.

    Good job.
    February 27th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • Kissyy

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    You've done amazing O.O
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • The Doctor

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    Very good, but too dark for me :\
    February 27th, 2011 at 03:59am
  • stereophonics28

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    Woah. Arbennig... Very morbid, but I like morbid things.
    February 26th, 2011 at 10:49pm
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