I agree, and thank you greatly. =]
I wrote this in a sort of silent rage, actually, which is probably why it's so vague and difficult to read on a first go. B)
But here I go making excuses again.
Some of the wording's a little hard to define excatly...but I kind of get the feeling it needs to be that way, in order for the emotions to come across right. Once again, awesome work.