War Inside My Head (I'm Alive! I'm Alive! I'm Alive!) - Comments

  • second-hand smoke

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    So powerful. You sure do have a way with words. I felt so confronted by this, like you were yelling at me. It's rare that I come across something like this - where I can actually feel the emotion within the writing so much so that I feel...intimidated? I don't know how to explain it! Great job, though!
    December 6th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • celtic.wicked.mind

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    fantastic job. <3
    May 12th, 2011 at 05:54pm
  • Beauty Fades Always

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    I like the way you put all these words together, i really love this. You did phenomenal. (:
    March 7th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • June_Music_C

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    You're poem is absolutely Amazing. I loved it.
    March 5th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • LifesJustMyCupOfTea

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    Brillent Poem :D
    March 5th, 2011 at 12:21pm
  • StandardMisery

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    this is fucking epic :D
    i liked this a lot
    and i can really relate to this
    kudos!
    March 5th, 2011 at 10:31am