The Angel's Tears - Comments

Wow... just wow

First of all thank you for entering my contest. I will P.M. the winners and post them on the contest forum:)

The emotions in the poem painted a picure for me. To be able to do that and not really being discriptive about it says something. It is long poem but from what I see you didn't fill it up with useless words.

Wow. This is really lovely. :) I would rephrase the last line in the first stanza to "And I know our lives together never should have mixed", if it was me. In the second stanza, third line, is it supposed to be "Never" or actually ever? Anyway, this poem is beautiful. It's relatable and touching, the rhyming and rhythm was done really well. I could feel the sadness and pain. Great job.

I am absolutely in love with the beauty in this poem. It's officially the best that I've ever read on here. Amazing.

this poem is absolutely fantastic. you aer the best teen-writer that i have ever met. and I encourage you to keep it up. <333

oh my god. this is the most amazing thing i've read in forever, seriously. i'm like lost for words right now.

That was quite frankly amazing!!
You had me sucked in from the very beginning!! :D
Well done!! :D

This is gorgeous. :O I haven't read a poem I've enjoyed quite this much in a while now (or it feels like that, at least). You kept a steady rhyme, a steady beat, a steady flow... just everything was excellent! Emotion definitely came across, and the way you tied the whole thing together with the same two lines was a nice touch. Also, the structure. A lot of times, structure can either make a poem flow wonderfully, or lack any flow at all. You did it wonderfully, choosing a great time to make a new stanza (I guess? Paragraph?).

I was actually very disappointed at the end. I wanted to read more. D: But I'm definitely checking out more of your work, and looking forward to it.

Excellent job! :D

Pretty poem :0

First of all, I really like the rhyme scheme. Even though I don’t really read too many poems, I am a sucker for a good rhyming scheme. So I have to say that I was rather impressed that the whole poem followed some sort of scheme.

This poem was magnificent. And you should know that I don’t say that about a lot of poems since, as I said before, I don’t usually read them. The whole concept of this poem was wonderful and you basically told a story within each stanza. I think it takes a wonderful poet to tell a complete story within their poems.

Anyway, wonderful job!

I loved how the ending was similar to the beginning :) you are so poetic, I love you for writing such awesome things :D

I like that you brought the first two lines back to end the poem as it began. Like the two below me said, this is beautifully written. You're a very talented poet.

You did a good job.

Agreed. This is very beautiful. (:

Beautifully written <3