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  • Eimie

    Eimie (100)

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    I loved the opening and how you were describing the scene. I was expecting this to be different, I'm glad my assumption was wrong.

    However I thought it dragged on a bit but that's just me. It flowed nicely, it was consistent, good job. :)
    March 24th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • sheakie

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    I love this it has such a strong and powerful ending, great job! :)
    March 24th, 2011 at 10:10am
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