Dude, I am sooooooooooooo sorry about your bro. I was only now reading through you profile and then you mentioned you brother.
And your poetry's beautiful.
*Hugs*
There's something so innocent about this song. Like a child adressing their father, or a father figure. It's beautiful and there's this flow of hope, although the (real) flow was a bit off in some places.
Still very touching.