Very nice, I was a bit iffy when I saw you were rhyming thinking that it was going to be a super peppy poem but it wasn't, it was just awesome. :)
May 6th, 2011 at 10:03am
this si awsome it's deep it's inspiring it makes you search yourself.. and take a better look at what you can do. very good keep it up.
(You left me broken and beaten. and yet i live on i live on)