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  • lovelybleedingheart

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    It is very good I like how u made her seem weak but in the end she wasent
    April 30th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • the vampire's lover

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    wow this is good. however, i personally believe you should have stuck with the beginning scenerio or transittioned it a little better. very good all in all though. i love the gruesome details
    April 30th, 2011 at 05:06am
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