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Utero (100)

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amazing!!!!

May 15th, 2011 at 04:44am

vampire_lover666 (100)

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I love this poem and the imagry you created. But don't take this personally because I myself never use profanity in my poems (because I feel like it ruins the effect) and I feel like that's what happened here. You have a wonderful poem with great imagry and dramatic effect and I just feel that the profanity sort of made the poem fall flat. But no harm no foul, I still love this poem :)

May 10th, 2011 at 08:46pm

Homeboy33 (100)

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This is amazing!!

May 10th, 2011 at 07:05pm

lovelybleedingheart (100)

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This is really good he got what he deserved

May 10th, 2011 at 06:01pm