God, let it be over - Comments

i think you just summed up my life in a beautifully written poem. amazing as it sounds this is almost the exact words i have been searching for to make everyone understand. you are a very talented writer. keep it up

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This was great.

Yet again you made an amazing connection with the readers. I think emotion is your strongest point when it comes to poems. I think however that you could work on the flow and re-word this then it'll be even better.

I can relate to this beautiful, soul-wrenching poem. I know the feeling of wanting everything to end so well. <3 I like how you have it written, too. The way your words just flow so easily. ^_^ Fantastic job!

I like again the use of you which allowed the reader a deeper connection. I didn't like the spacing again but that's just me cause there's some rhyme in there that I think is too distanced by the space but then again maybe it was unintentional/intentional?

I think a lot of people can relate cause we've all been at the end of the rope before but at the same time it let's them in to who the writer is instead of directly connecting it to themselves. I like the familiarity your forcing with the audience above all because I feel like every poem should try to make the reader think about something or feels something and that's what communicates it in this poem.