My Love is Guaranteed. - Comments

i feel like if you moved somethings around it would flow better but other than that well done

June 20th, 2011 at 08:10pm

This is brilliant! I really like it :) Well done

June 17th, 2011 at 10:30am

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! :)

June 16th, 2011 at 11:40pm

I like this. I should use it to explain to my friends why I am a feminist:D. Thank you for this. It's very powerful.

June 16th, 2011 at 08:23pm

I really like this, especially the first stanza.
it shows strong emotions, almost anger? and determination

keep writing :)

June 16th, 2011 at 08:03pm

The stripper thing was pretty good.
I liked it.

June 16th, 2011 at 07:54pm

I liked the part of you saying you wer'nt a stripper.I'm going to use that as a comeback.Don't worry if you guys broke of it was only 5 months.

June 16th, 2011 at 07:39pm