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  • slaughtermyheart

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    i love this, this is so good dont let that dumb ass emery guy bring you down :P
    P.S.... i love the title :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 06:15am
  • Dawnflower

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    I really like this poem and it is really well written. Good job!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • emo_jamiet

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    You bring sweetness to darkness and make it sound appealing. I'm not sure if that's exactly "good", but I enjoyed it nonetheless. (:
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • Aurielle

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    I like it.
    Its well written and very good
    June 22nd, 2011 at 07:26pm
  • SMILEawayy

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    This is beautiful
    I love the line, "Beauty has never contaminated me."
    I love it.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:34pm