Thoughts of an Unknown - Comments

  • emo_jamiet

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    Well, my comment seems to be only a reiteration, but I can't help but say it all again. I loved it, obviously. You have wonderful word choices, eloquent and intelligent while keeping it angsty (but not over powering). Your poem does indeed create a bold and vivid image, letting you feel the poem, letting you experience it. You're an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading anything else you have. (:
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:13pm
  • Clockwork_Creation

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    Very nice. I like your words and the picture you paint with them. I would very much like to read more from you. Keep painting.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:09pm
  • Aurielle

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    I definatly agree with the first comment.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 07:26pm
  • SMILEawayy

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    Okay, I love this one more than the first.
    I told myself I wan't going to comment on all of your poems, but it seems as though I have so far.
    You tell a very intricate story with vivid imagery and bold emotions. Its quite amazing, to tell you the truth.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:36pm