Well, my comment seems to be only a reiteration, but I can't help but say it all again. I loved it, obviously. You have wonderful word choices, eloquent and intelligent while keeping it angsty (but not over powering). Your poem does indeed create a bold and vivid image, letting you feel the poem, letting you experience it. You're an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading anything else you have. (:
June 22nd, 2011 at 08:13pm