Inhuman (with outro) - Comments

Sweetie, you really do have talent. I loved the flow you have, I love how smooth the rhythm is, I just love everything about this song. Seriously, you would be an amazing song writer if you ever persue that career. I especially adore the chorus of this song.

Overall, it was amazing <33

I really like this, I could imagine it as a song with some really great guitars in it :) The lyrics seem very heartfelt and emotional, but still flow well together.

This is really cool. I could totally imagine it being a rock or metal song. I want it on my ipod haha

Hmm, I think you have something pretty cool here. I love the descriptions and the comparison that you spread throughout the lyrics. They all work really well together which is wonderful to see. There is a sense of harmony in each peace which is really important and you make sure that they continue to flow which is even more important. All in all, tis wonderfully done.