This is brilliant :)
April 29th, 2012 at 12:05pm
Can I Tell You A Story? - Comments
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i loved this :3July 5th, 2011 at 08:02pm
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The rhyme scheme in this was fantastic, I love how the line
"Can I tell you a story?
One that will bring you to tears?
The story of my tragic 16 years."
Was reused and changed slightly, like
"It's the story of the joy she found in her tragic 16 years."
At that point a more hopeful tone picked up in the poem.
Great piece(:July 5th, 2011 at 07:41pm
