A Dream...Or Was It? - Comments

This was definitely an awesome display of imagery. It was beautiful and peaceful. I could feel everything and see everything and understand it all. It felt so peaceful and nice. Then there was the confusion at the end which was done really well.
The flow is off though. There's not a good rhythm. Try reading it out loud?

This poem had a peaceful mood to it. I don't know if that's what you intended for but it's the one that seemed more prominent than others. The poem is definitely an attention grabber. When I was reading it I pretty much saw a little girl walking through a field in the dark. The fireflies and fairies were the only form of lights for miles. I like poems that can pain a picture in my head. Especially when they're written as simply as this one. You're a great writer.