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  • The Doctor

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    Very nice. :3 All I have to say is, you don't need the apostrophe on the 'its' in the last stanza.
    August 17th, 2011 at 07:18am
  • T-Grieco

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    I'm very impressed with this poem. You captured the feeling of what the poem is all about with not a lot of words. You have a nice writing style.
    July 9th, 2011 at 07:54am
  • waves wash

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    this was nice,I liked it
    July 9th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • the power of justice

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    I really liked it, you managed to convey a meaningful message behind a short, sharp poem :)
    July 9th, 2011 at 05:54am
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