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  • Nyan

    Nyan (100)

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    I love the last stanza that you wrote. XD it's really good. I can realize somewhat to the poem. Maybe that's why I liked the last stanza so much. And the rhyme scheme is VERY unique. XD I've never seen it before and I love it. XD
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:08pm
  • LifesJustMyCupOfTea

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    Fascinating poem. I really love the title. Eye catching. The poem itself went together quiet well. I really liked the concept of the bird and the last stanza. “Rather a broken wing than the disability to fly. Just hope and reach for the future in sight.”<3
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:06pm
  • Those Who Favor Fire

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    I absolutley love this! This is brilliant. I especially love the last stanza. Overall, this is a near flawless poem in my eyes. Well done! -nods- Keep it up!!! :D
    July 19th, 2011 at 10:58pm
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