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  • delirium.

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    Wow, this was something I could relate to. :/ It's why I hate being in a relationship, feeling as if everything they do is a lie because of a previous one where you DID believe them and he was the wrong one. Ugh. Really great poem,I loved how each line was short, but each statement was really powerful.
    October 6th, 2013 at 06:34pm
  • LoveCouldBeMuchMore

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    This is true down to the very last word. I've been in this situation too many times to count.
    I love the way you wrote it too. Short quick statement for each line and it was an almost rhyme to where you heard similar sounds but not exact rhyming was done. (: Clever and very emotional. LOVE IT!
    August 27th, 2011 at 05:32am
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